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Blackout
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Telling me more than any story I’ve heard.
Equaling more than any painting or word.
Showing me wonders with your starry lit mind.
Sustaining me when the world seems so unkind.
Encouraging me always, throughout every instance.
Resurrecting me infinitely - through all spheres of existence.
Thank You.
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You are not your job, your titles, your possessions, your degrees, your lovers, your relationships, your place of residence, your social security number, your ID, your bills, your worries, your bank account, your age or your body. You are the timeless being that created & perceives itself through those things, and you have the power to play or not play that game. When someone asks me "what do you do?" looking for some title to pin me down, I laugh and say "EVERYTHING!" - Blackout
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BAD MUTHA FUCKA
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i would replace starry with stellar and title the poem thank you.
not to shabby.
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BAD MUTHA FUCKA
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Originally posted by HighFidelity:
its good, i wouldnt change nothing
what an ass kisser.
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Blackout
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Stellar is too 80s dude-ish as in:
"WOAH! dude that wave was stellar!"
Not that I don't like the 80's dude-ismness but it wouldn't have fit. 'Stellar' is a word I expect appeared many times in the script for 'Gleaming the Cube'.
So I chose to go with the classic albeit somehwhat overused 'starry'.
There is a secret to that poem that people who know me should instantly see.
And now, for something completely similar, I want to talk about nooks and crannies
I am fucking in love with nooks and crannies. I think nooks and crannies can only be found in Thomas' English Muffins although I am not sure which is which I just fucking love them. I know I have seen nooks in other places but NEVER with a crannie and I don't think I have ever seen a crannie other than in a thomas english muffin...and I don't even know what the fuck a crannie is! I mean.. is it the parts between the nooks? Are the nooks the holes, and the crannies the... the... the parts between the nooks? I'm eating one right now and I'm in fucking paradise. If I could have sex with the nooks and crannies, I would. It sounds so dirty... like, "oh baby I want to lick your crannie!" but 'nook' is technically more corrrct right...? Like, "I did her in the nook," or are they interchangeable? Fuck! I'm baffled. I am going to call Thomas and ask him to tell me what the fuck once and for all what parts are the 'nooks' and what parts are the 'crannies' cause I want to see if I can get some muffins with 'crannies only' and see if they taste any different.
I think this may have destroyed the artistic sanctity of my poem I should really edit out this muffin part to its own space.
the whole thing that got me thinking about nooks and crannies was Gilbert Godfre but he doesn't even understand that Thomas' English Muffins are really so superior because they are the only English muffins to have 'nooks and crannies'. He would just eat any old 'english muffin' and I'm just not down with that.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f1NRBWkmP74
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You are not your job, your titles, your possessions, your degrees, your lovers, your relationships, your place of residence, your social security number, your ID, your bills, your worries, your bank account, your age or your body. You are the timeless being that created & perceives itself through those things, and you have the power to play or not play that game. When someone asks me "what do you do?" looking for some title to pin me down, I laugh and say "EVERYTHING!" - Blackout
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Reine
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I dig this one. Spheres inspire me. Pythagorean harmony...
The Music Of The Spheres
Celestial harmonies,
Form above our heads.
Music of the spheres,
Spins light and understanding.
Creativity, is beyond what we see,
As the spindle turns,
The sirens of the heavens hum,
Vibrating your soul to the core,
The most beautiful transition,
A life could endure.
Warm rays of tone and perfection,
Octives of nature, fall over us in grace.
Intoxicating night, I feel you soar;
Symphony of the universe,
Heal me.
I think English muffins nooks and crannies are like cousins to the hole. I also believe the English were inspired by gazing at the moon. What better way to capture the moon then in a muffin. they are superimposed craters of buttery delight for your senses. That's my take anyway.
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Sobk13
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Whoever he/she was, it sounds as if they touched you in the best way possible.
Sweet poem.
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Cottonjaws
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If you want a beat poem replace starry with Fuck or Cunt and your away...
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I want to know a little bit about everything and a lot about nothing....
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Blackout
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Originally posted by Sobk13:
Whoever he/she was, it sounds as if they touched you in the best way possible.
How did you know this? Did you have spy cameras in my sexy place? ![[Confused]](confused.gif) ![[Mad]](mad.gif)
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You are not your job, your titles, your possessions, your degrees, your lovers, your relationships, your place of residence, your social security number, your ID, your bills, your worries, your bank account, your age or your body. You are the timeless being that created & perceives itself through those things, and you have the power to play or not play that game. When someone asks me "what do you do?" looking for some title to pin me down, I laugh and say "EVERYTHING!" - Blackout
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Sobk13
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Originally posted by Blackout:
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Originally posted by Sobk13:
Whoever he/she was, it sounds as if they touched you in the best way possible.
How did you know this? Did you have spy cameras in my sexy place?
I don't need spy cameras; I am an evil sorceress. Apparently.
*Kissy* ![[Hippy Chic]](graemlins/hippy.gif)
Posts: 283 | From: London, England | Registered: Apr 2009
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