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amithyst32
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you make me cry,
you make me sigh.
you make me live,
you make me die.
you always lie.
i dont know what to do,
i dont even know if i want to.
the pain you keep leaveing in my heart,
it has been tareing me apart.
you promise loyalty and love,
then you take it and crush it from above.
do you mean anything you say?
is it all ribbons and dreams anyway?
you keep playing with my head,
it makes me wish i were dead.
my heart has been torn asunder,
it has shattered like a storm with thunder.
i cannot take the pain.
cant you hear me call your name?
take away this horrible feeling,
so that i can start healing.
give back what you have taken,
do not leave me here forsaken.
let me walk into the abyss,
i am something you will not miss.
i am tiered of the servitude,
all's i get is everyones attitude.
tell me what you want of me,
i am tiered of it and i cant see.
you promise faith,loyalty,and trust.
but it is nothing but pixiedust.
you lie,you hurt, and you steal my heart.
cant you see you are tareing me apart?
give me truth,real loyalty,and your love.
then and only then will i believe in the stars above.
for my darling mathias.
i happen to love writeing poetry to get out my feelings ect...i have a dozen of um...this was just how i felt at the moment so thought i would share some..if anyone else cares to they can join in..or whatever.i am sure i will write more later...see yaz

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here is another one i wrote a while back:>
your love takes me to cloud nine.
i think about you all the time.
you are mine forever more,
tell me i am your hore.
whisper dark nothings in my ear,
they turn me on for i love it to hear.
i want to scream when you bite me so.
as i am sure you well know.
i look into your eyes i see forever.
for us to part never.
you are my one and the same,
my lips forever call your name.
you build a passion withen me,
i am sure you can see.
your black heart is mine to hold,
forever mine as i am told.
we shall sail into the abyss together,
forever to be as one through any weather.
you are my soul,my lover,my hear.
we shall never be apart.
so tare the others assunder,
we shall go down as thunder.
i am your master,your slave,
i am your princess,your knave.
you are my dragon knight,
always there for a fight.
you are my prince in a mask,
to do as i ask.
i wrote that a while back for my mathias but it still goes out to him:>i have some more i have to write for him so i can give it to him on wednesday so after i do i will write it on here also:>bye for now:>

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I love all you writers on here. I feel like I am getting to peek into your souls. Herb's little autobiographies. Blackouts little phillosophy blurbs. Just to name a few.

So many different styles. Different shades of souls.

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i think your poetry sucks.
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quote:
i think your poetry sucks.
THANK YOU!!!!

Jesus. Everyone thinks they can be a fucking poet.

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Oh, I can do it too! Watch me go!

Not sure what to say,
glad that i'm not gay.
Who knows if i'm right,
my pants are getting tight.
It could be that I'm wrong,
think I'll ask my bong.
I'll make this shit up as I go,
she got a visit from aunt flo.
The tide is turing red,
goodnight I'm off to bed.

no but really, good night.

<^>

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God you guys chill out. [Razz]

There are different levels of performing other art mediums (besides writing). NOT everyone that sings Karaoke (or at an amateur night) is going to get an album deal (unless you are William Hung), but the voice medium for fun times and self expression.

Same goes with writing (or any other artistic medium). It is a good form of self expression, a mind challenging hobby and a therapeutic way to relieve stress.

So simmer down a little. *simmer*

Well, obviously you don’t HAVE to simmer [Wink] (I am not even a moderator on here) but I like when Blackout's Box is a happy place. Its been so gloomy here lately. [Confused]

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quote:
So simmer down a little. *simmer*
I'm sorry. It's just one of those things that annoys me. Well, poetry in general annoys me.

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Maestra is indeed a sexy geek.

"Primitive humans make tools; computer-designed, high-tech hand tools." -program description from The History Channel's Modern Marvels

"I wish God were alive to see this." -Homer Simpson

"And my stage directions make no sense. How is it possible for me to wear clown make up AND be sober all at once?" -Davan MacIntire

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Okay. I just thought you were being a thread bully.

But then I realized, it was Festivus. And this was simply the airing of grievances...

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well i dont think my poetry is that bad but everyone is entitled to thier oppinion..shrug..and like i said in the begining of it i use it to get things out ect..makes me feel a tad bit better..so here is another poem i was just thinking of cause of things..

you thought you were safe and secure in my womb,
unknowing it would be your tomb.
i see i have reeped what i have sown,
if i had only known.
i should of turned away,
thought about it one more day.
i am starting to wonder now,
i keep thinking why and how.
why did i do this to something that never got a start,
it is tearing me apart.
all because of a father so selfish,uncareing,and cruel.
i'd like him to be dipped in gruel.
i wanted you so,
this you must know.
i couldnt do it alone i'm sorry to say.
thats why i had to do that that faitful day.
i will see you in heaven my little love,
where you will soar as high as a dove.
with your sister so sweet,
she will cherish you like a treat.
my two babies in heaven i love you so.
i thought i would tell you so you could know.
to my unamed one from mommy.

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i wish you would go to hell,
it became as clear as a bell.
you lied to me you freaking scum.
i am sure you lie in your own cum.
you are a asshole and a prick.
i am sure your real name should be rick.
i am sure you know what i mean mathias,you lie and treat me like sht.
i am sure you dont care and lie to everyone you see you piece of sht.
your lies are like a story in a play reality to you,
you dont know how to really treat real people you dont know what to really do.
go to hell you little prick,
why dont you play with your little dick.:>
your balls are as saggy as an old man.
why dont you put them in a can..(lol)
you are a horrible lover.
why dont i blow your cover.
i have told the truth why dont you?
do you know what you must do?
you are scum eternal for this i know.
why dont you do something why must i be the only one to show?
tell the truth you little lier.
so i can put you on your funeral pier.
i hate you you freaking scumbag.
your true self is as ugly as an old hag!
to my matt!if you havent guessed i want it over and want my stuff and want you gone,dead,fin,over,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone,gone!!!!ok thinks thats it now i feel better sigh

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Heh. This isn't really poetry, but I used to be into writing lyrics (hiphop, of course).

i sound like an off beat white boy who cant rhyme

jump off stage and squirt ya in tha eye wit a spritz of lime

nobody ever told me dat murderin you was a crime (oops)

the music's like crack so listen to one track at a time

side effects of listenin to my collaboration include constipation of the entire nation

anyways, whats wrong wit sellin drugs outta Uncle Jim's basement?

ill shoot a bullet at myself just to hit you wit its casing

smash you wit a vasing

take em outta ya shoes and strangle ya wit ya own lacings

leavin severe embrasions to the point ya vision starts hazin

its truly amazin that i did this outta the blue wit no confrontation

youre a product of test tubes and ejaculation

im a specimen straight outta alien nation

which is why im a monstrosity of a caucasion

blazin up trees while you wrinkle em like raisins

im similar to dr. evil cuz i got a sidekick named #2

its the pencil that i used to stencil ya existance dood

i dont even know ya name, who is this fool?

you disgust me like i just stepped in warm animal pooh

and i was rockin a brand new pair of air force one shoes

any obsticle in my way homeboy i run through

you come up short similar to ja rule

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i think this pretty much sums it up.

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Perhaps this:

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lol @ ya'll. Comment how you feel. I could give a fuck. :x
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quote:
Originally posted by eFekt-oNe:
lol @ ya'll. Comment how you feel. I could give a fuck. :x

Now that was deep.
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No, this is

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Or better yet:

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Maestra is indeed a sexy geek.

"Primitive humans make tools; computer-designed, high-tech hand tools." -program description from The History Channel's Modern Marvels

"I wish God were alive to see this." -Homer Simpson

"And my stage directions make no sense. How is it possible for me to wear clown make up AND be sober all at once?" -Davan MacIntire

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quote:
Originally posted by BAD MUTHA FUCKA:
i think this pretty much sums it up.

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lol @ this nigga putting a pic of 50 on here. lol @ you. :x
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man fuck you nigga, you're wack like 50 that's why i put it up.

but you know what? I think this one is the perfect fit.

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Word.

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Maestra is indeed a sexy geek.

"Primitive humans make tools; computer-designed, high-tech hand tools." -program description from The History Channel's Modern Marvels

"I wish God were alive to see this." -Homer Simpson

"And my stage directions make no sense. How is it possible for me to wear clown make up AND be sober all at once?" -Davan MacIntire

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One mean dwarf.....

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quote:
Originally posted by amithyst32:
well i dont think my poetry is that bad but everyone is entitled to thier oppinion..shrug..and like i said in the begining of it i use it to get things out ect..makes me feel a tad bit better..

amithy,

Everyone on here is evil pranksters. And usually not getting as much sex as we would like (is there really EVER enough?). Blackout sprinkles blurpinkle pixie dust in the water system. I think he pees in there too sometimes, but that is just a theory at this point.

Consider any response at all from anyone a strange compliment of recognition. And mimicry is one of the highest forms of flattery.

Oh, BTW, are you a hottie? If not, delete what I just said above... [Wink] [Big Grin]

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quote:
Originally posted by Cottonjaws:
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One mean dwarf.....

Babelfish translation:
What the time I take. Its Arnold personage, the fame and the money. Gary coleman of actor to guard. Gary coleman, that very small one that to the 12 years became a star of the American TV with the Black and white comedy, changed of profession. The ex- mofletudo actor and pícaro, that Sunday in its native Illinois fulfills 30 years, now are personal of security of a parking of cars. Like other children prodigy, Gary the passage of time did not play to him favor: it was outside the screen, it lost fame and money and it had to look for a new work to satisfy his necessities.

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quote:
Originally posted by BAD MUTHA FUCKA:
man fuck you nigga, you're wack like 50 that's why i put it up.

but you know what? I think this one is the perfect fit.

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lol @ the internet thug. "fuck you nigga". ha. stfu you ho nigga. you think me lyrics wack, son? i could give a fuck, cuz its not like im trying to become a rap artist, you faggot. plus, i only seen yo bitch ass criticizin in here, i ain't seen you post shit, weak ass chichimon rassclaat. Dis nigga thinkin he Mike Jones or some shit.

Who?

Mike Jooooooooones

Plus, I'd rather be

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Than:

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like yo ass. [Smile] [Smoke] Smoke one to dis nigga being a bitch (or a hairy ass pussy, take it how you want). :X

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By the way, the tits in that pic were for bunny's viewing pleasure. [Razz] The rest of the image was to compare to that other chump.
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thanx bunny:>i kinda figured they were on to much dope:>hey how the heck do we put our pix on here?i have a few (ok tons!)i could put just cant figure out how.i dont know if i am a hottie but i look darn good for my age i guess lol..i keep getting mistaken for someone under 21 when i am 32:>and my boyfriend likes to lift me up and swing me around(ok i like it too giggle) so i guess i aint so bad:>i aint got big boobs though:< i am saveing for a boob job lol:>well hugs i am babbeling and alls i hear is my daughter going through her clothes and she needs to get her butt in bed cause i have to be up early in the morning for work.then off to go out w my silly dorky forgetful gothy boyfriend:>hugs to ya all;>
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If you're in Internet Explorer, right click on the pic you want, go to Properties,and highlight everything under "Address (URL)" and copy and paste that where you want to post your pic.

In Mozilla Firefox, just right click on it, and "Copy Image Location" and paste it where you want to post your pic.

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quote:
Originally posted by BAD MUTHA FUCKA:
i think your poetry sucks.

I second that - sucky sucks.

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quote:
Originally posted by Shostie:
quote:
i think your poetry sucks.
THANK YOU!!!!

Jesus. Everyone thinks they can be a fucking poet.

They always do.

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I'm not real big on poetry either. I'm decent at writing...but not really into it. I'm not that sensitive of a guy to serenade my girlfriend with poetry n shit. Not my style.
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ok thanx efk and hopefully this pic will show:>it is for metal slug:>  -
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ok and here is another one i think is funny for yaz metal slug:>it is me doing the same thing a while back w my boyfriend:>  -
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quote:
you thought you were safe and secure in my womb,
unknowing it would be your tomb.

Somehow, and I'm sure totally inadvertadely, you have managed to write the most brilliant two lines of poetry ever formulated in the English language.

All your other poetry, and your posts in general, are terrible, however.

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Kinda freakin me out mannnnnnnnnnnnnn.

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*Distant water wont quench your immediate thirst.
*A smile will gain you ten more years of life.

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quote:
Originally posted by eFekt-oNe:
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Originally posted by BAD MUTHA FUCKA:
man fuck you nigga, you're wack like 50 that's why i put it up.

but you know what? I think this one is the perfect fit.

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lol @ the internet thug. "fuck you nigga". ha. stfu you ho nigga. you think me lyrics wack, son? i could give a fuck, cuz its not like im trying to become a rap artist, you faggot. plus, i only seen yo bitch ass criticizin in here, i ain't seen you post shit, weak ass chichimon rassclaat. Dis nigga thinkin he Mike Jones or some shit.

Who?

Mike Jooooooooones

Plus, I'd rather be

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Than:

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like yo ass. [Smile] [Smoke] Smoke one to dis nigga being a bitch (or a hairy ass pussy, take it how you want). :X

Bitch! you're just a trendy ass wigga who watches to much MTV and bumps too much Kanye West or the Neptunes.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NEWSFLASH HOMO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU ARE NOT HIP-HOP.

Man you couldn't be hip-hop if your life depended on it.

You are just a shit eating bitch because you eat up all the shit you see on tv or hear on the radio and you adjust your style and attitude to fit accordingly something you think you are but most certainly are not.

You can find the image to this response here :

http://www.blackout.com/blackout/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=forum;f=22;DaysPrune=1000

it's the post entitled:

efekt one is a little shit eating bitch. NSFW

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